Editing Sample
This sample demonstrates your ability to clarify, restructure, and improve ambiguous or disorganized writing.
Original Text (Before)
"Users should sometimes try to check the sync settings because if something is not working right then maybe it's a syncing problem and the user might want to see if the notes are in the right folder or not because sometimes they aren't."
Revised Text (After)
To resolve most syncing issues:
- Open Settings → Sync
- Ensure syncing is enabled
- Verify that your notes appear inside the correct folder
- If problems continue, run a manual sync or restart the app
Explanation of Changes
- Broke one long sentence into a clear step list
- Removed ambiguous language (“sometimes”, “maybe”)
- Added direct verbs (“Open”, “Ensure”, “Verify”)
- Reorganized information logically
- Focused on user action rather than speculation
This sample highlights:
- Editing clarity
- Structural reorganization
- Reader-centered communication